the envelope slant rhymes have a little way of ebbing and flowing. how dearly i love when someone is artist enough to have their content shape the form of their work
thank you so much wow. iโm really particular about my own poetic form and i like to be intentional because it can elevate the themes behind the words really well. i feel like the beauty of poetry is spewing my indiscernible thoughts and then arranging them in a way that flows well and feels satisfying thematically
and you do it really well !! when the poetic voice thinks lyrically but allows and trusts the meaning enough to emerge through arrangement and rhythm itโs like the poemโs structure embodies the whole thing and just yeah becomes a craft instead of a narrative
Cooper, u ate with this, my god! i know your writing is gonna be good as hell in your upcoming articles.
This gives me nostalgia for some reason. Feels like something i read as a kid.
Thank you so much :)) I definitely tried to make it like a myth or a fairy tale style.
Seriously i appreciate the support and iโm glad youโre excited for my upcoming writing. It keeps me going whenever i hit a writerโs block ๐ซก
Of course it's no problem at all.
Keep up the amazing work, seriously.
this is the first time i've read anything by you and holyfuckingshit ive been missing out. so so so good.
AHH thanks for giving me a read!
thanks for writing it are u kidding
I like this. It feels deeply narrative yet strangely poetic, as though a story had merged with the rhythm of a poem.
thanks for reading ๐ฆ
underneath his lichen skin !! Iโm reeling
ty iโm glad it hit for you ๐ชฐ
oh, wow. left flabbergasted by how aching this felt
iโm glad you liked it, ty for reading ๐ฆ
Gosh this was truly heartbreaking!! Absolutely loved it ๐ค
thanks for reading ๐ชฐ
the envelope slant rhymes have a little way of ebbing and flowing. how dearly i love when someone is artist enough to have their content shape the form of their work
thank you so much wow. iโm really particular about my own poetic form and i like to be intentional because it can elevate the themes behind the words really well. i feel like the beauty of poetry is spewing my indiscernible thoughts and then arranging them in a way that flows well and feels satisfying thematically
and you do it really well !! when the poetic voice thinks lyrically but allows and trusts the meaning enough to emerge through arrangement and rhythm itโs like the poemโs structure embodies the whole thing and just yeah becomes a craft instead of a narrative
literally so kind of you to do this close of a reading tysm ๐๐
utterly haunting.
eeee yay thanks for reading! more haunting stuff in the works ๐ค
wow this is so good!! itโs haunting and extremely visual, i love it!
thank you! iโm very proud of the imagery in this one so i appreciate that you appreciated it :))
you definitely should be proud of it, the imagery is amazing! my favorite line is โeach driftwood arm and seaweed hairโ i think thatโs brilliant
This was insanely good!
tysm Mateo! always a pleasure hearing your feedback
loved this!
Thank youuu ๐ฆ
San diego cooper did it good did it fun and most importantly did it ugly.
I fell in love with the piece. Iโve been studying male writers for my own files lol but I rarely leave impressed. Keep going!! ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅ
thanks for the support!! ๐ฉถ
Iโm fighting the urge to say youโre welcomeโฆ oh loook? I lost. Girls Iโm sorry. ๐
thank you luca!!